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‘’So this is it?’’ You asked, looking up at the tall hotel in front of you.
‘’Yes.’’ You started to open the door but Gilbert, who was in the front driver’s seat held you back.
‘’Close the door.’’ You did as he said.
‘’What? I want to get this over with.’’
‘’Are you sure you want to do this?’’
‘’Of course I am. I’ve never hated a person more than I hate her. I want her dead. And if that means losing the small bit of common sanity I still have in me, then so be it.’’
‘’I don’t want you to end up like her.’’
‘’ What do you mean?’’
‘’Wanting more.’’
‘’DO YOU HONESTLY THINK I’M GOING TO BECOME A DEMENTED BITCH?... If you do... you have nothing to worry about. I have a heart. She was physiologically born without one.’’
‘’Okay. But... ‘’
‘’No. Gilbert there is no question in my mind. I want her dead. And I’m going to be the one to kill her. Do you understand? You will go in the hotel room. Do whatever it is you need to do to restrain her. Then you open the door and what is going to happen will happen.’’ He stared at you.
‘’You can’t tell Lovino I’m letting you do this.’’ Antonio spoke up for the first time since you had gotten in the car.
‘’If he notices something wrong, I will tell him. I’ll tell him it was my idea.’’
‘’He won’t believe you.’’ Gilbert was frowning. You could tell this was going to hurt him but you had to get rid of her.
‘’I’ll make him believe me. That’s the least important thing right now.’’
‘’Fine, how are we going to dispose of the bodies?’’
‘’There’s this small cabin on the north side of Italy. Isabella wanted to kill you and Lovino then burn your bodies in there.’’
‘’Is it in a public place?’’ You asked.
‘’No, It’s about  43 miles away from any living soul.’’
‘’ That’s perfect, how are we going to get Bridget’s body from the fourth floor?’’
‘’That’s already done and taken care of Lieben.’’
‘’How so?’’
‘’While you were changing I brought the body to the car. It’s in the trunk.’’
‘’That’s... repulsive.’’
‘’Nien lieben, It’s work that had to be done.’’
‘’How are we going to get Isabella’s body into the trunk?’’
‘’You ask way to many questions Lieben.’’
‘’Fine. Let’s go.’’ You got down from the car and followed Antonio and Gilbert into the hotel. At the reception desk Gilbert simply took out a card and kept walking. The receptionist looked at the card and smiled as she nodded ad scribbled something on her notepad.
‘’You two can wait outside the room until I come out. It’s not going to take long to restrain her. She believes blindly in me... That’s a mistake.’’
‘’Okay.’’ You all went in the elevator. They always made you nauseous.
‘’Okay. ‘Be right back.’’ Gilbert swiped the card and wet in the room.

Gilbert’s p.o.v.
‘’Isa I’m here.’’ I put the card on the nearest drawer.
‘’Kay baby, how’d it go?’’ She came out of the room. She was wearing a black tank top and some extremely short shorts. Completely irresistible. I took the thought out of my mind as she went into my arms. I held her tightly against me. I would miss her. I loved her so much. She was once my whole entire life. But not anymore. I no longer had a life. That’s why I had to get my revenge.
‘’It went according to plan. Your sister’s dead. Her body is in the trunk. As for Bridget, she is in the trunk as well.’’
‘’That’s perfect. Let’s get going.’’
‘’Not so fast lieben.’’
‘’What?’’ She said as she taunted me.
‘’I want to play a game. Like the one we played last week. But better.’’
‘’Oh. The bodies in the trunk can wait. On the other hand, mine can’t.’’
‘’Let’s start. I took the familiar cuffs from out of her backpack. she sat on a chair. She was now in only her bra and underwear. I went to her and cuffed her hands to the chair then tied her ankles to the feet of the chair with a pillow sheet.
‘’Come on baby.’’
‘’Hold up I almost forgot the best part. I’ll be right back.’’ I went to the door around the corner of the huge suite.
‘’Come in.’’ Antonio went in first. I saw you take a deep breath and you followed.
‘’Tony you came too?’’ Isabella’s voice was tempting. You stayed behind the corner out of sight. You wanted to make an entrance.
‘’This should be fun.’’ Isabella said staring at both me and Antonio.
‘’Long time no see Bella.’’
‘’Same Tony. But c’mon you didn’t come all this way to chat did you. You to Gil.’’ She was biting her bottom lip.
‘’Actually Bell... No I didn’t.’’
‘’That’s the Tony I know.’’ She smiled a wicked smile. I wasn’t surprised she was hitting on Antonio. She did the same with every living male she knew. But Antonio had never paid attention to her. He was practically Lovino’s brother.
‘’Isa...’’ I said quietly.
‘’Did you ever love me?’’
‘’Of course she didn’t. She doesn’t have a heart remember.’’ You came out from behind the corner. Isabella was shocked. Her breathing was getting heavier.
‘’What... what- she- how- Gilbert.’’ She was starting to pull on the cuffs.
‘’Remember when we were little sis?’’ Your voice was sweet and malicious. Like Isabella’s when she was getting scary.  You walked closer to her. She seemed to grow more uncomfortable with every step you took.
‘’What the hell are you doing here?’’
Reader’s P.O.V.
‘’Do you remember? We were six. We were six when you went into dads study and took one of these out.’’ I took a gun from out of my back pocket and waved it in front of her face.
‘’I was so scared, so incredibly scared when you went into our room and jumped on my bed. I was sleeping but you woke me up. You pointed it at me. I started crying but you said it was only toy, only a big person’s toy. I calmed down... That’s a mistake I’ll never forget.’’ The gun was pressured to the side of her head now.
‘’You told me a story. About how we were going to play a game. You were the criminal and I was the good guy. Remember, Isabella?’’
‘’What the hell are you doing here.’’
‘’DO. YOU. REMEMBER?!’’ I pressed the gun firmly against her head.
‘’Yes! Yes! I remember.’’
‘’Good. We’re going to play that game. Like before, you’re the bad guy, and I’m good.’’
‘’Get away from me.’’ She almost whispered.
‘’Did you get away from me when I told you to back then?’’
‘’No but, ____________ please calm down. We can talk.’’
‘’Oh we’re going to talk, you have a lot of explaining to do.’’
‘’I’ll tell you whatever you want to know.’’
‘’No... I want to torture you while you tell me. So... you don’t have to tell m everything. I’ll make you. It’ll be fun.’’
‘’Since when are you like this?’’
‘’Like what?’’
‘’Malicious... Bad.’’
‘’It’s in our blood remember? I just have a better control of what I do. Unlike you, I have a heart and the ability to love.’’
‘’Gilbert... help... please.’’ Isabella spoke to Gilbert who was looking away.
‘’Gilbert, pass me your pocket knife.’’
‘’What?’’ Gilbert looked at you in confusion.
‘’Gilbert now.’’ He took the pocket knife out of his pocket and threw it at you.
‘’Now, what say we start by... oh yeah... You always liked your eyes didn’t you?’’
‘’NO. Please don’t.’’
‘’First question... When we in middle school, what did you put in my drink that made me almost have a stroke?’’
‘’It was poisoned. What was it?’’
‘’I don’t remember.’’ Her face was inclining towards the back of the chair.
‘’Thought so.’’ I had no mercy and held her face still. I cut a bit below her eyelid. She screamed in pain.
‘’Second, Where were you those 2 days when dad went missing?’’ She, despite her bleeding face, started laughing maniacally.
‘’You still remember?’’ She said between her scary laugh.
‘’Of course I do.’’
‘’Well, if you really want to know, I was with daddy.’’ She laughed again this time harder.
‘’What did you do?’’
‘’Do you want to know why no one ever found his body?’’ She was laughing so hard her face was getting red. You just started at her.   You were 16 when your father had mysteriously disappeared. You had been waiting for him to come back from the office. You sat at the table. Alone. Your mother had died earlier that year. You fell asleep on the table and woke up the next day. Isabella hadn’t come back either. She had gone to the mall with some of her friends. But she didn’t come back the next day or the next.
‘Huh... Do you honestly want to know?’’ She was still laughing.
‘’I’ll take that as a yes......... I met him on his way back from work, about two blocks away from the house. I was dressed in all black and I pointed a gun at the car. I got in the car and he drove me to a cabin. You remember that cabin right _____________?  Yes well, there I took off the mask I was wearing, you should have seen his face. So full of confusion, disbelief, ...pain.  You probably don’t remember; when he came in our room every night. He took me and left you sleep. He abused me, raped me, took advantage of every living hope in my body. He said my personality reminded him of mothers. So bold, stubborn. Anyway, I took him to the cabin and stripped off my clothes. I asked him if he still wanted me. He just cried and shook his head. He pleaded. But I didn’t listen. Like he didn’t listen all those nights from age 6 to age 15. I tortured him and made him watch me, while I moved around. I didn’t kill him. He was to be tortured, hurt, and inflicted with pain and fury, but not yet. You never found his body did you? No one ever did, and no one ever will.... Daddy’s alive _____________ , daddy never left.’’ She continued to laugh.  
’’...Daddy follows.’’
Ooh girl. That took alot of imagination. Tell me if the ''mature content'' filter is required.
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SesskagRULES Featured By Owner May 11, 2013
Oh Wow..... :iconemocornerplz: I kinda feel bad for her... BUT NEIN SHE KILLED MEIN LUDDY. :iconludwigbeilschmidtplz: SO SHE MUST DIE. >.>
SomeOrdinaryArtists Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
bluegirl1997 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Student
that explained some awful shit
pastalover45 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
Holy shit OAO
grimtales1lizzybird Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
congadulations, you have succssed in totally and completely confusing me. Not many reader inserts can do that. For your awsomly awsome work I give you a cookie and cake :iconcookie1plz::iconcookie2plz::iconcookie3plz:

Awsome story and plot twist
DayDreamer5656 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
dude...issable has one fucked up childhood
Leoyun Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
gosh. this is one badly educated family.
*excuse me while the inner me goes agape with mouth opened*
XdeadlysorrowX Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:O oh my
Shadesatran Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
Oh man :L.

Feeling pity that the father did that to her but still.. Luddy ;A;..
neo-planet Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
That us one creepy messed up dad
Spicy-Cinnamon Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
;; moar. ;;
xMerrie Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist
Oh my, this plot.. it's just.. just AWESOME 8D ~
XDJAPAN Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks hun
xMerrie Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist
No problem! ~
SherryVeramuto Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh the tensions ans suspense in this chapter!! I LOVE it!!!
It's wonderful!!

XDJAPAN Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. I love it too. I come up with random plots at random times. I have absolutely no clue how though. I'm all happy one moment then BAM all inspired and feeling suicidalish. Then after I write the story I feel all happy again. I just realized how creepy that sounded.
SherryVeramuto Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ahahahaha, lolz XDD
XShadow-Wolf-DemonX Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Student Writer



I knew giving Isabella from Health class a piece of paper today was a mistake QQ
XDJAPAN Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lemonater Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
holy mother!!!!!!
and I thought i came up with deranged things to put in readers? (lol jk, i only have one or two that are deranged)
this is amazing! i am on the edge of my seat!!!!!

MORE! lol
XDJAPAN Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lol thanks
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